The above letters are active and represents a river flowing up the hill and coming down though the valley.I thought the version 1 idea was okay but the suggestion I got was to make the letters actually reflect the activeness of the river. So in the version 2, the letters are actively spinning to reflect the flow of the river. When rivers flow, items that are moving in the river actively spin around and that is what the letters are showing.
The pictures above represent static. The letters can not be moved or changed. In the version 1 the suggestions I got was to make it really hard to move so I reduced the size and put the letters really close to each other. This has made it tiny so that it will be very difficult for the letters to be recognized and that will make it hard to temper with.
In the pictures above represent grouping. The version 1 had space in between the letters. I closed the space to make the letters look as if they were one in the version 2.
The above letters were picked randomly. The letters are appearing without a method or conscious decision.The M is sitting on J and J is siting on W. W appears to be stronger because it is carrying all the weight from M and J. The suggestion I got was to let the M and W look symmetric somehow.
The symbol here represent unity. Together the 3 letters can be a formidable force. Unity they stand divided they fall. The version 1 had space between the J and M and I was advised to bring the J at the bottom to close the space. The version 2 has J at the bottom to show the umbrella handle.